Western Civilization was without a doubt
the greatest advancement in the history of civilization. During the Neolithic
Era, civilizations sprouted in the west, with the coming of agriculture, which
lead down many different paths, such as to trade and religion. Although some issues did sprout up during this time period, they all would have been unavoidable, even if it was developing in another civilization.
Western Civilizations opened the door to
several things that would lead to prosperous societies. First, the development
of agriculture is what allowed a surplus of food. This
surplus is what ultimately lead to occupations being created, because now that everybody did not have to work all day, every day in order to supply a group with food.
More efficient ways were created to collect and grow crops so now people had more time on their hands.
For example, the Phoenicians learned how to make a purple powder, so they could
make purple textiles. These soon became a sign of wealth and power, so it was
naturally very expensive. The Phoenicians then traded these textiles and other
resources to maintain their civilization. That is where trade comes into play. Although some civilizations depended on it more than others, it still did the
same job of spreading culture and religion throughout the Mediterranean basin. Through
all of this spread of ideas from so many different areas, civilizations were
able to learn and develop even further in the years to come.
Some issues that stemmed from Western
Civilization, such as social hierarchy and slavery, are accused of being the
ultimate result of the West, and their development to have been a big mistake. This,
however, is not true; because these problems would have developed no matter
what civilization it originated in. Any civilization needs a social hierarchy
to be able to function properly. No matter how terrible it must have been to be
at the bottom of the social ladder during the Neolithic Era, these people were
the basis of Western Civilization. Without these people of lower status constantly
working, there would not be room for civilizations to develop an economy, or
trade market, or anything else it needed to thrive. This downside to Western
Civilization is actually the most important part of it's development. No matter what
civilization had been the first to pop up, it would have created some form of slavery and social hierarchy, or
else the civilization itself would not have been able to develop at all.
Good James. I like that you are starting off with a strong thesis, and backing it up with argumentation. I think you also could have explored the complexity of these issues by indicating a bit further that there may be no simple answers to these questions, and that sometimes you take the good with the bad. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI like/agree with your theory on the inevitability of problems that occur as a result of revolutions! I think it would've been beneficial to include a little bit more on why this happens, but ultimately it was great!
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