The
Neolithic Revolution, also known as the Agricultural Revolution, began around
10,000 B.C.E., and was essential to the creation civilization, as we know it today. Agriculture allowed humans to stay in one
territory and develop expanding communities.
Paleolithic hunter-gatherer tribes before then could only be comprised
of twenty to thirty people. In
Paleolithic tribes, everyone had more or less equal status and equal influence,
since everyone performed the same tasks and contributed evenly. While this method of government works well in
small groups, it could not support the societies as large as those that formed
in the Neolithic Age. With the different
jobs agriculture also brought, came social hierarchy, allowing for the
governing of larger populations. Men, being typically physically stronger than
women, rose to a higher social status, as they were the ones who would plow
most frequently. Although agriculture
was the primary, source of food, it was not the only. Another great advancement, domestication,
provided meat without needing to roam in search of large animals that were
hunted to near extinction. Also, because
they were able to settle down in one area, Neolithic cultures also developed a
greater connection with their environment, so more complex belief systems and
traditions, like complicated burials, were created.
Without
agriculture we would not be able have the complex societies we have today,
however, this more modern life also had its downsides. Because grains became a large staple in the
Neolithic diet, average health decreased.
Working in fields was, and still is, extremely strenuous, so many people
had hunched backs from stooping and bad joints from duress. The larger communities also saw corrupt
leaders who took advantage of their power over the masses. This problem is one that we still struggle
with today, and is arguably the most harmful aspect of society. This downside however, is an unavoidable part
of large civilizations, so with prosperity, will always come other obstacles .
Great post overall, I really liked how you gave some background about the Neolithic period before just jumping into it. Good analysis, the only thing I would advice is to expand on the downs. Good job.
ReplyDeleteJust a personal opinion, but I think you could put more of your thoughts into the paragraph. While your writing is all spot on accurate, I feel that you need to branch out a little more. Take a stand about whether this was a good thing, a bad thing; more argument! :)
ReplyDeleteI really love the argument that you make in your last sentence "...with prosperity, will always come other obstacles". I think that you could further expand on that argument. In your last paragraph you begin to connect the changes and developments in the paleolithic age to today's world and I think you could have expanded those connections. Overall good job --you explain why things changed, maybe just a little more analysis about why those changes matter. :)
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